Incomplete

Incomplete

By Shizuka Seki


My room will not be mine for long;
That’s always the case with girls.
School days are over;
College will be over too,
Without staying at home.
Then, I will live in a place unfamiliar.
Now, I really wish my room to be left as it is forever.
Its a part of me.

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I believe it speaks loud and clear, about the innate feelings of a girl, the pain of looking forward to uncertainty while portraying the sincere wish to keep the past.


I was indeed touched. We, in our terms, usually overlook this emotional issue, or at least try not to acknowledge it. The huge sacrifice a girl has to make in this negotiation called marriage or ‘given away’.


I bring myself to understand this. But how can I understand what I will not feel.


The last couple of lines bring in a sincere wish to keep her room as it is. The girl wants everyone to remember her as she was, a little girl in the decorated room, and not solely by what she has chosen to be.

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Shizuka Seki is a sixteen year old girl, just out of High School. She has written various verses and is a nascent talent in arts and literature.

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